leave-ing the party

Chèvre hosts tan renga party at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai .  A tan renga is a haiku by one poet answered in 2 (7 syllable) lines by another poet.




now it reveals its hidden side
and now the other—thus it falls,
an autumn leaf                                 © Ryokan Taigu

do leaves ever feel dizzy—
twirling in their spiral dance?                lynn__

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Chèvrefeuille
    May 17, 2017 @ 19:34:38

    I like the humor of your question in that 2nd stanza Lynn__


  2. Janice
    May 17, 2017 @ 15:01:48

    That’s a beautiful response Lynn…for me it fits with the haiku very well 🌷🌷


  3. Rosemary Nissen-Wade
    May 16, 2017 @ 17:54:03

    The question makes me smile.


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