sound of rain

pitter – pat – patter

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on sidewalk

spitter – spat – spatter

on windowpane

beads drip

from

clothesline

baubles drop

from

leafed vine

gutters gurgle

cheerily

rivulets burble

merrily

umbrella unfolds

earthworm unholes

birdsong stills as

rain gauge fills

lightning tumbles

thunder rumbles

cloudburst pours

find shelter indoors!


Quadrille prompt on “sound” ideas with Victoria at dVerse

7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. sanaarizvi
    May 28, 2017 @ 02:12:42

    Lovely use of onomatopoeia here 🙂

    Reply

  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    May 25, 2017 @ 08:37:33

    Love the onomatopoeia you have used.

    Reply

  3. colorfulpen
    May 24, 2017 @ 19:51:24

    Lovely sounds and rhyme!

    Reply

  4. Imelda
    May 24, 2017 @ 14:13:58

    I enjoyed the words and the presentation. 🙂

    Reply

  5. Victoria C. Slotto
    May 24, 2017 @ 12:51:12

    Lovely spring poem, Lynn–so many sounds to drink in.

    Reply

  6. gerrymackrell
    May 24, 2017 @ 11:17:19

    And life will continue. Nice to observe.

    Reply

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