jazZed!

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image/jazz prompt – dVerse Poets

 

gotta lotta

grooove, yeah

smile-a-while

ratta tat rrrrrollll

pppissshhh

get UP in stride

then down…slide

step on cat’s tail

yeeeooowwll

sing, tom CAT!

lone saxyphone’s

liquid eyes hone

salty inDIGo tears

tickle tuned ears

coolest fools rule

don’t mute it, dude!

puff up cheeks

chEEKy trumpet

pump it up

to A squeal

play guts out

rhino nose blow

releases it ALL…over

 

23 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. jillys2016
    Nov 26, 2017 @ 14:16:09

    Loaded with allusion. I especially appreciate the tip of the hat to the Rhino Label. Nice!

    Reply

  2. Sherry Marr
    Nov 25, 2017 @ 09:53:46

    I especially love the indigo tears.

    Reply

  3. Charley
    Nov 25, 2017 @ 09:03:30

    “lone saxyphone’s / liquid eyes hone / salty inDIGo tears…” Yes. This fits the song beautifully.

    Reply

  4. Angela
    Nov 25, 2017 @ 08:54:35

    I love how jazz is compared to a cat, and how the sounds stand out and gave me pause to hear and relish them.

    Reply

  5. mhmp77
    Nov 25, 2017 @ 01:34:39

    kaykuala

    play guts out
    rhino nose blow
    releases it ALL…over

    A rhino comes into play in this jazzy theme. Very interesting lynn!

    Hank

    Reply

  6. rothpoetry
    Nov 24, 2017 @ 17:59:26

    At first I thought it was a marching band…. Then it moved on to a Mardi Gras parade, mid cat howls and cool Jazz! Great Poem!
    Dwight

    Reply

  7. Grace
    Nov 24, 2017 @ 16:09:15

    I love all the sounds specially: step on cat’s tail

    yeeeooowwll

    sing, tomCAT!

    Reply

  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Nov 24, 2017 @ 15:24:52

    I can hear the cat… jazz is so feline.

    Reply

  9. Gospel Isosceles
    Nov 24, 2017 @ 15:06:23

    What a tune! The “chEEKy trumpet” solo was my favorite part.

    Reply

  10. Frank Hubeny
    Nov 24, 2017 @ 10:45:09

    I liked the sound of this line: “coolest fools rule”

    Reply

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