love’s fire fiercely burns
devotion ignites desire
vows consummated

Tragic comedy or comic tragedy? Read love’s drama at CDHK
posting poetic prose
06 Dec 2017 2 Comments
in haiku Tags: desire, fire, love, vows
love’s fire fiercely burns
devotion ignites desire
vows consummated
Tragic comedy or comic tragedy? Read love’s drama at CDHK
Dec 07, 2017 @ 19:07:45
Very strong story hidden in this haiku / senryu
Dec 07, 2017 @ 19:13:48
Yes, a good love story takes years to write.