whimsical banquet of delight

A quadrille (exactly 44 words) for Victoria’s poem prompt at dVerse this week. We recently visited Princeville Botanical Gardens in Kauai and enjoyed a fabulous tour!

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helaconia spectabilis

 

 

Tour of

garden botanical

on island tropical

inspires poetical verse.

 

We admire

foliage fantastical

blossoms symmetrical

design creational diverse.

 

To explain

health benefits topical

know ripe fruits medicinal

guide is natural nurse.

 

To taste

dark chocolate delectable

cacao content palatable

tourist opens available purse!

 

 

 

48 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. whimsygizmo's avatar whimsygizmo
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 16:31:55

    Such fun rhyme here! I love it.

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  2. Nan Mykel's avatar Nan Mykel
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 16:20:11

    I laughed out loud. Clever, Love it!

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  3. Laura Bloomsbury's avatar Laura Bloomsbury
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 15:44:42

    those endings are delicious Lynn –

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  4. Candace's avatar Candy
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 15:36:14

    this is fantastical! 😉

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  5. hennaglance's avatar belle jars
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 15:28:17

    Ha. Love the last stanza. 🙂

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  6. Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa)'s avatar Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa)
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 14:56:25

    Me thinks your poem is a tropical paradise all on its own!❤️

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  7. Jane Dougherty's avatar Jane Dougherty
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 14:40:14

    I like the shape of this poem, Lynn. It made me think of a fan wafting your words 🙂

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  8. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar Victoria C. Slotto
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 14:13:10

    Ah, the wonder of the tropics and natural medicine. I really liked your rhyme scheme in this one, too, Lynn.

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  9. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 14:12:06

    Feel that I would like to open my wallet for some tropical right now… 🙂

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  10. whippetwisdom's avatar whippetwisdom
    Jan 29, 2018 @ 10:57:01

    A wonderful quadrille Lynn, love the rhythm of your walk through the tropical gardens ☺💖 xxx

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