well & done

 

Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai challenges us to “revise” a classical haiku by famous female haiku writer. Here is my humble attempt…

 

morning glory!

the well bucket-entangled,

I ask for water

© Chiyo-Ni

 

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glory of morning

entangled in blooming vine

beauty fills my well

© lynn

2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Chèvrefeuille
    Feb 19, 2018 @ 13:35:08

    Wow Lynn what a wonderful revision of this famous haiku by Chiyo-Ni.

    Reply

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