Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai challenges us to “revise” a classical haiku by famous female haiku writer. Here is my humble attempt…
morning glory!
the well bucket-entangled,
I ask for water
© Chiyo-Ni
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glory of morning
entangled in blooming vine
beauty fills my well
© lynn
Feb 19, 2018 @ 13:35:08
Wow Lynn what a wonderful revision of this famous haiku by Chiyo-Ni.
Feb 19, 2018 @ 13:36:45
Thank you so much…I am humbly proud now.