“The cock crowing in the milky dawn thinks its call raises the sun;”
– René Daumal
old cock winter crows
easterly wind heralds storm
free image – pexels
red sun is rising
Haiku inspired by quote (Carpe Diem Haiku Kai) in less-than-inspiring weather.
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a poem in my pocket 
Apr 10, 2018 @ 13:52:11
Nicely crafted. That last line does it for me … a nice comparison.
Apr 10, 2018 @ 14:01:20
Thanks for your comment…I edited several times but think I like it now.
Apr 09, 2018 @ 09:20:28
the last line echoes the cockscomb beautifully
Apr 09, 2018 @ 09:54:50
Thanks for noticing 🙂