fruity freefall

De at dVerse challenges us to write a quadrille (44 words) with a little “zip” in it!


hey, bae, it’s okay

take poetic time-out

creative juice surf’s up

let your imagination

go zip-lining!

paintbrush crush

colour your wourld

kiwi lime and cyanberry

don’t refrain

your right(eous) brain

from livin’ life out loud

make magnetic magic

taste tangy tangerine

whee feelin’ gigglee!




16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Mish
    Apr 11, 2018 @ 23:06:02

    Love the idea of the imagination going zip-lining. An uplifting, colourful quadrille!


  2. Daniela Marin
    Apr 11, 2018 @ 12:09:28

    Zippy, fruity, colorful feeling of joy! Beautiful!


  3. rothpoetry
    Apr 09, 2018 @ 20:59:02

    Live this live like there is no tomorrow poem!


  4. Waltermarks
    Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:56:15

    I think that’s the best way to write or do anything creative. Too much thought makes it overdone. instead, you’ve woven a world of color here and have a fruit salad to boot


  5. jillys2016
    Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:32:39

    I want to sing this! Or better yet, jump rope to it. Love, love, love it, Lynn! Wheeee!!!!


  6. mango fauna
    Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:33:38

    This is so cool!!!

    “let your imagination
    go zip-lining!
    paintbrush crush”

    “kiwi lime and cyanberry
    donโ€™t refrain
    your right(eous) brain”

    Love, love, love.


  7. Grace
    Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:23:54

    Gigglee – ing with your fruity ziplining fall ~ Such fun Lynn ~


  8. whimsygizmo
    Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:16:44

    “paintbrush crush”
    and THIS: “cyanberry”

    This poem makes me infinitely happy. ๐Ÿ™‚


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