De at dVerse challenges us to write a quadrille (44 words) with a little “zip” in it!
hey, bae, it’s okay
take poetic time-out
creative juice surf’s up
let your imagination
go zip-lining!
paintbrush crush
colour your wourld
kiwi lime and cyanberry
don’t refrain
your right(eous) brain
from livin’ life out loud
make magnetic magic
taste tangy tangerine
whee feelin’ gigglee!
Apr 11, 2018 @ 23:06:02
Love the idea of the imagination going zip-lining. An uplifting, colourful quadrille!
Apr 11, 2018 @ 23:07:47
Thanks, Mish ๐
Apr 11, 2018 @ 12:09:28
Zippy, fruity, colorful feeling of joy! Beautiful!
Apr 11, 2018 @ 14:20:32
Yes, tastes like JOY…thank you!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 20:59:02
Live this live like there is no tomorrow poem!
Dwight
Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:56:15
I think that’s the best way to write or do anything creative. Too much thought makes it overdone. instead, you’ve woven a world of color here and have a fruit salad to boot
Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:57:57
I like your yummy comment!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 20:39:13
Thanks, we like fruit flavored gummy stuff
Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:32:39
I want to sing this! Or better yet, jump rope to it. Love, love, love it, Lynn! Wheeee!!!!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:34:36
Jump rope…yessss!!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:33:38
This is so cool!!!
“let your imagination
go zip-lining!
paintbrush crush”
“kiwi lime and cyanberry
donโt refrain
your right(eous) brain”
Love, love, love.
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:55:48
thank you so much ๐
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:23:54
Gigglee – ing with your fruity ziplining fall ~ Such fun Lynn ~
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:54:26
It was a blast…thanks!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:16:44
THIS!
“paintbrush crush”
and THIS: “cyanberry”
Brilliant!
This poem makes me infinitely happy. ๐
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:53:53
Yay, De…glad you liked it! Cyanberry makes me hungry ๐