De at dVerse challenges us to write a quadrille (44 words) with a little “zip” in it!
hey, bae, it’s okay
take poetic time-out
creative juice surf’s up
let your imagination
go zip-lining!
paintbrush crush
colour your wourld
kiwi lime and cyanberry
don’t refrain
your right(eous) brain
from livin’ life out loud
make magnetic magic
taste tangy tangerine
whee feelin’ gigglee!
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Apr 11, 2018 @ 23:06:02
Love the idea of the imagination going zip-lining. An uplifting, colourful quadrille!
Apr 11, 2018 @ 23:07:47
Thanks, Mish π
Apr 11, 2018 @ 12:09:28
Zippy, fruity, colorful feeling of joy! Beautiful!
Apr 11, 2018 @ 14:20:32
Yes, tastes like JOY…thank you!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 20:59:02
Live this live like there is no tomorrow poem!
Dwight
Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:56:15
I think that’s the best way to write or do anything creative. Too much thought makes it overdone. instead, you’ve woven a world of color here and have a fruit salad to boot
Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:57:57
I like your yummy comment!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 20:39:13
Thanks, we like fruit flavored gummy stuff
Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:32:39
I want to sing this! Or better yet, jump rope to it. Love, love, love it, Lynn! Wheeee!!!!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 19:34:36
Jump rope…yessss!!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:33:38
This is so cool!!!
“let your imagination
go zip-lining!
paintbrush crush”
“kiwi lime and cyanberry
donβt refrain
your right(eous) brain”
Love, love, love.
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:55:48
thank you so much π
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:23:54
Gigglee – ing with your fruity ziplining fall ~ Such fun Lynn ~
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:54:26
It was a blast…thanks!
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:16:44
THIS!
“paintbrush crush”
and THIS: “cyanberry”
Brilliant!
This poem makes me infinitely happy. π
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:53:53
Yay, De…glad you liked it! Cyanberry makes me hungry π