honey-dewed sighs

 

honey, do you love me?

why don’t you say it louder

with your warm, strong hands

holding me closer until i melt

into your steady, beating chest

where i find the safest nest

within your steady heart  best

so hold me closer until i melt

into your strong, warm hands

why not say it louder–

honey, you do love me!

 

 


A mirror poem for Frank’s reverse poetry prompt at dVerse Poets

17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. CoffeeLander
    Aug 29, 2018 @ 16:12:33

    Perhaps he is shy. 😉 Nice poem.

    Reply

  2. Colin Lee
    Aug 22, 2018 @ 20:26:46

    Splendid. The reversal does add emotional strength to it effectively. Very enjoyable.

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  3. Candy
    Aug 17, 2018 @ 14:03:04

    you have certainly met the challenge with this lovely poem!

    Reply

  4. kim881
    Aug 17, 2018 @ 04:15:02

    I love the progression from question to exclamation, Lynn, and your reverse poem is so full of passion!

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  5. V.J. Knutson
    Aug 16, 2018 @ 20:20:01

    This works!

    Reply

  6. rothpoetry
    Aug 16, 2018 @ 19:36:57

    I love your poem. It flows well both ways. A Sweet Love Song!

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  7. Grace
    Aug 16, 2018 @ 17:09:14

    Sweet and I love that middle turn verse turning this from questionning to positive affirmation of love!

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  8. lillian
    Aug 16, 2018 @ 16:25:42

    Love the affirmation you’ve achieved here! 😊

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  9. Jane Dougherty
    Aug 16, 2018 @ 16:09:12

    I think this one works well, Lynn. You got the two different meanings.

    Reply

  10. Frank Hubeny
    Aug 16, 2018 @ 15:31:25

    Very nice love poem. I like how you made bold the center line. You could take the first, last and that center line as one poem.

    Reply

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