Lillian is serving up quadrilles at the dVerse poets pub tonight!
may home be calm harbor
where load is lighter, not harder
welcome all with warmest ardor
share from heart’s generous larder
offer love a safe haven to anchor
retreat from world’s loud rancor
into shelter of peaceful arbor
make our home a restful harbor
Sep 26, 2018 @ 09:57:54
All homes should be that calm harbor where we feel safe and secure. Love this, Lynn. xo
Sep 26, 2018 @ 10:59:06
Yes…thank you, Gayle!
Sep 25, 2018 @ 14:41:55
The rhymes make me happy… so does the end of a peaceful home
Sep 25, 2018 @ 13:39:08
Amen! ❤ Such a sweet and prayerful voice in this, Lynn 😊
Sep 25, 2018 @ 22:00:22
Thank you, Sanaa!
Sep 25, 2018 @ 07:09:56
“Make our home a resful harbor.” I do believe you could market that line….it’s a keeper! A prayer – a way to live – a way to bring up our children so they know they are always welcome and loved. Beautiful!
Sep 25, 2018 @ 09:40:41
A quote painted on sign to display in a beach home 🙂 Thanks, Lillian!
Sep 25, 2018 @ 04:32:37
Your rhymes are delightful — home being a calm harbour is a resonant thought. I really liked how positive and uplifting your verse is.
-HA
Sep 25, 2018 @ 09:41:15
I appreciate your comment, HA.
Sep 25, 2018 @ 02:58:18
I like the ‘or/er’ sounds that echo at and punctuate the end of each line, emphasising the peace and comfort of home.
Sep 25, 2018 @ 09:41:48
Glad you liked it, Kim.
Sep 25, 2018 @ 02:23:42
beautiful rhymes and a beautiful wish – all homes no matter big or small should give us this feeling
Sep 25, 2018 @ 09:42:37
Yes, I think so!
Sep 24, 2018 @ 21:06:31
Live the rhymes Lynn! Yes. Home should be a safe and restful harbor
Sep 24, 2018 @ 21:18:33
Yes, Toni…I do want to live these rhymes 🙂
Sep 24, 2018 @ 22:40:04
I have a feeling you do
Sep 24, 2018 @ 20:31:50
Very interesting take on the prompt. I agree home is the place to find a harbor for all. I liked the end word rhymes…. a neat idea!
Sep 24, 2018 @ 20:38:12
Thanks, Dwight…a home should be hospitable!
Sep 24, 2018 @ 21:14:11
Yes!
Sep 24, 2018 @ 19:31:29
Love the end-rhymes and ending line is a prayer: make our home a restful harbor
Sep 25, 2018 @ 09:43:28
Thanks for noticing it ends as prayer, Grace 🙂
Sep 24, 2018 @ 17:56:59
Hmm.. A Quick Visit to dVerse Long Enough For Sweet
Sixteen And JusT beFore i Shut the Computer off for
Gym Time Next.. once again i See Lynn SMiLinG At
The Very End NoW at
Number
27..
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i’LL get
back for the
‘tween of that
And perhaps i won’t
but Never the less
A Lynn Place
aLWays
Seems
Like A Harbor For
Friend for tHere Is No
Harbor Greater Than FriEnd
For FriEnd is God when two
or More Folks coMe toGeTHeR As FriEnd And reAlly That’s All
i Need to kNow beFore i could even sPeak at age 4 for i fELt thiS
God (LOVE)
Then
iNGrasp
of MOTHeR’S
Touch and
Other
Friends
i Reached Out to: For Free From:
NoT aLL Hugs Were reTurned For
It’s True mY FriEnd Some Folks See A Smaller God Harbor Than me As You..:)
Sep 24, 2018 @ 20:26:20
Friends are a harbor…and God is the ultimate! Thanks for stopping by and leaving a little LOVE note, my friend 🙂
Sep 24, 2018 @ 21:05:04
As aLWays Thanks
For the Welcome..
FriEnd Lynn..:)