Basho revisited

First haiku by Basho, second a revision by me…linked to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

samazama no koto omoidasu sakura kana

how many, many things
they call to mind
these cherry-blossoms!

 

recall, my friend, those

cherry blossom memories!

…many moons ago

 

joel-neff-618786-unsplash 

Photo by Joel Neff on Unsplash

 

5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Chèvrefeuille
    Oct 02, 2018 @ 17:12:54

    Amazing revision … chapeau Lynn__

    Reply

  2. rivrvlogr
    Oct 01, 2018 @ 17:55:12

    Nice revision.

    Reply

  3. Bobby Fairfield
    Oct 01, 2018 @ 17:04:05

    A beautiful response

    Reply

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