First haiku by Basho, second a revision by me…linked to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
samazama no koto omoidasu sakura kana
how many, many things
they call to mind
these cherry-blossoms!
recall, my friend, those
cherry blossom memories!
…many moons ago
Photo by Joel Neff on Unsplash
Oct 02, 2018 @ 17:12:54
Amazing revision … chapeau Lynn__
Oct 02, 2018 @ 23:09:40
taking a bow…thank you
Oct 01, 2018 @ 17:55:12
Nice revision.
Oct 01, 2018 @ 22:11:23
Thanks, Ken.
Oct 01, 2018 @ 17:04:05
A beautiful response