rise!

 

disciples and Jesus
share passover meal
Judas betrays him—
kiss seals the deal

arrested, on trial
in kangaroo court
soldiers spit, hit,
crown him for sport

Pilate denies
hate crucifies
Messiah dies

tomb found empty
wondrous surprise
because he lives
we, too, will rise!

 


The day after Resurrection Sunday and linking a quadrille (44 words) for dVerse prompt using the word “rise”.

24 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Becoming His Tapestry's avatar Becoming His Tapestry
    Apr 23, 2019 @ 14:46:36

    amen! love this Lynn.. Praise the Lord!

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  2. Linda Lee Lyberg's avatar Charmed Chaos
    Apr 23, 2019 @ 14:01:51

    Perfect telling of the story Lynn!

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  3. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford
    Apr 23, 2019 @ 12:37:47

    The Easter story in 44 rhyming words! What an accomplishment. So well done. A lovely remibder of what Easter is all about. Blessings

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  4. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith
    Apr 23, 2019 @ 07:08:23

    You managed to tell the story in 44 words. Nicely done.

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  5. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny
    Apr 23, 2019 @ 05:55:13

    For some it was just sport: “crown him for sport”

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  6. D. Avery @shiftnshake's avatar D. Avery @shiftnshake
    Apr 22, 2019 @ 19:56:47

    Story told in 44 words!

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  7. Grace's avatar Grace
    Apr 22, 2019 @ 19:06:40

    A timely Easter message Lynn.

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  8. Maggie C's avatar Maggie C
    Apr 22, 2019 @ 18:55:51

    So well told with just 44 words.

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  9. Maggie C's avatar Maggie C
    Apr 22, 2019 @ 18:54:51

    So well told in only 44 words!

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  10. revivedwriter's avatar revivedwriter
    Apr 22, 2019 @ 18:45:21

    This is great!

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