
carrion crow’s flight
wings chop air with whirring sound
caw cacophony
swoop down to murder
sharp beaks jab at feast and mates
fight over road kill
I added a second haiku to join dVerse poets as we revisit “imagism”; MTB (meeting the bar) challenge hosted by Frank J. Tassone…check it out!
Jun 20, 2020 @ 19:01:09
I love, “wings chop air with whirring sound”.
Beautiful work, Lynn.
Jun 20, 2020 @ 23:19:06
Thank you, Sara 🙂
Jun 20, 2020 @ 11:52:58
You’ve set the scene beautifully–it’s not a pretty sight. (K)
Jun 19, 2020 @ 17:41:37
I love crows. These were very real.
Jun 19, 2020 @ 18:04:17
thanks, D.
Jun 19, 2020 @ 15:33:02
In flight or when still, crows seem packed with motion. You capture that well.
Jun 19, 2020 @ 16:17:10
Nothing passive about crows 🙂
Jun 19, 2020 @ 15:14:29
Hunger of every kind make people do strange things! Fighting over roadkill… an image of a many situations in life!
Jun 19, 2020 @ 16:16:28
Yes, it’s real and surreal…a metaphor, I think.
Jun 19, 2020 @ 18:23:08
yes! Very good!
Jun 19, 2020 @ 11:55:46
Cawlicious!