P rominent sister cluster
L aunched by cosmic Creator
E ngage celestial song
I n irrepressible praise
A bove benighted planet
D iamonds on black satin
E ver refract God’s glory
S even: sweet sum of wholeness
Written as an acrostic with seven syllables in each line; linking to dVerse
Nov 26, 2020 @ 07:28:12
Sweet sum of wholeness indeed. And these words
“Engage celestial song
In irrepressible praise”
Enjoyed this very much!
Nov 27, 2020 @ 06:32:39
Glad you heard it too, Lillian π
Nov 25, 2020 @ 23:21:12
Well crafted Lynn, I enjoyed this.
Nov 27, 2020 @ 06:33:08
thanks for stopping by, Rob π
Nov 25, 2020 @ 14:21:42
Seven sums up heaven… lovely diamonds indeed.
Nov 25, 2020 @ 21:36:58
Heavenly gems!
Nov 25, 2020 @ 08:27:54
Beautiful and your line “Diamonds on black satin” is stellar!
Nov 25, 2020 @ 21:42:39
Glad you like it!
Nov 26, 2020 @ 20:43:17
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Nov 25, 2020 @ 06:51:34
Brilliant title! and these lines really do sing out
“E ngage celestial song
I n irrepressible praise
A bove benighted planet”
Nov 25, 2020 @ 07:57:45
Thanks much, Laura, for hearing the music π
Nov 25, 2020 @ 03:50:02
‘S even: sweet sum of wholeness’ sums it up indeed, Lynn!
Nov 25, 2020 @ 03:28:00
“Diamonds on black satin” so subtle and so good!
Nov 25, 2020 @ 06:43:57
Thank you kindly, Jay!
Nov 24, 2020 @ 23:17:58
Such a soothing effect and shining cleanly on black satin. Wonderfully done lynn!
Hank
Nov 25, 2020 @ 06:43:16
Glad you like it, Hank π
Nov 24, 2020 @ 22:58:04
Loved it Lynn!
Nov 25, 2020 @ 06:42:52
YaY!!
Nov 25, 2020 @ 09:13:16
:>)
Nov 24, 2020 @ 20:12:19
Diamonds on black satin…I can see them shining. (K)
Nov 24, 2020 @ 22:08:04
thanks for noticing the sparkle, k
Nov 24, 2020 @ 19:21:14
I love your poems, Lynn
Nov 24, 2020 @ 22:07:16
Aw, thanks a bunch, Brenda!
Nov 24, 2020 @ 19:17:36
I really like this, especially the concluding line. β€
Nov 24, 2020 @ 22:06:46
Glad you like it, Jenna π