interstellar music

P rominent sister cluster

L aunched by cosmic Creator

E ngage celestial song

I n irrepressible praise

A bove benighted planet

D iamonds on black satin

E ver refract God’s glory

S even: sweet sum of wholeness

Written as an acrostic with seven syllables in each line; linking to dVerse

25 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Nov 25, 2020 @ 14:21:42

    Seven sums up heaven… lovely diamonds indeed.

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  2. Eugi's avatar -Eugenia
    Nov 25, 2020 @ 08:27:54

    Beautiful and your line “Diamonds on black satin” is stellar!

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  3. Laura Bloomsbury's avatar Laura Bloomsbury
    Nov 25, 2020 @ 06:51:34

    Brilliant title! and these lines really do sing out
    “E ngage celestial song

    I n irrepressible praise

    A bove benighted planet”

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  4. kim881's avatar kim881
    Nov 25, 2020 @ 03:50:02

    ‘S even: sweet sum of wholeness’ sums it up indeed, Lynn!

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  5. M Jay Dixit's avatar M Jay Dixit
    Nov 25, 2020 @ 03:28:00

    “Diamonds on black satin” so subtle and so good!

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  6. hank77's avatar hank77
    Nov 24, 2020 @ 23:17:58

    Such a soothing effect and shining cleanly on black satin. Wonderfully done lynn!

    Hank

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  7. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Nov 24, 2020 @ 22:58:04

    Loved it Lynn!

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  8. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo
    Nov 24, 2020 @ 20:12:19

    Diamonds on black satin…I can see them shining. (K)

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  9. Becoming His Tapestry's avatar Becoming His Tapestry
    Nov 24, 2020 @ 19:21:14

    I love your poems, Lynn

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  10. revivedwriter's avatar revivedwriter
    Nov 24, 2020 @ 19:17:36

    I really like this, especially the concluding line. โค

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