acrostic plus

G rumbling won’t improve your mood
R emember to count all blessings good
O pportunities abound to appreciate
W onders around you, small and great
I nterest shown to those you love
N oticed here and up above
G od cares about heart attitude

if you find yourself doing life sol O
to meet new friends presents a goa L
pursue that hobby you never trie D
take the time to enjoy the rid E
you aren’t getting any younge R


Lillian proposes a puzzle poem so here’s an acrostic plus for dVerse poets today…

39 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Aug 25, 2021 @ 13:28:02

    Yes we need to reserve our time wisely before it’s too late.

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  2. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford
    Aug 25, 2021 @ 11:29:34

    Timely advice. Well written!!!

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  3. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    Aug 25, 2021 @ 11:13:02

    A heartfelt message woven beautifully.

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  4. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen Dehner
    Aug 25, 2021 @ 10:41:02

    As we are all growing older, your acrostic+ fits the bill!!!!

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  5. Ron.'s avatar Ron.
    Aug 25, 2021 @ 06:25:27

    This old poet digs your verse. Write on, Sister.

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  6. Lucy's avatar Lucy
    Aug 24, 2021 @ 20:26:56

    Beautifully said!

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  7. Grace's avatar Grace
    Aug 24, 2021 @ 20:03:38

    I like the lines of meeting new friends and pursuing new hobbies. Well done with the form Lynn.

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  8. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz
    Aug 24, 2021 @ 19:23:44

    A lovely poem, Lyn, with a heartwarming message ❤

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  9. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli
    Aug 24, 2021 @ 18:25:06

    I enjoy your benediction very much, Lynn.

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  10. Bethann Bakker's avatar Bethann Bakker
    Aug 24, 2021 @ 17:48:23

    Love that, Lyn!

    On Tue, Aug 24, 2021, 5:37 PM a poem in my pocket wrote:

    > lynn__ posted: ” G rumbling won’t improve your mood R emember to count all > blessings good O pportunities abound to appreciateW onders around you, > small and greatI nterest shown to those you loveN oticed and paid back > aboveG od cares about heart attitude if you find your” >

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