january sky

03 Feb 2022 6 Comments

by lynn__ in Uncategorized Tags: , , , ,

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roaring down the beach
at the height of winter waves
mist clouds
                                by Jane Reichhold

roll damp chill over sand dunes
ghosted with dusting of snow

                                 by lynn__

Tan renga response to another poet’s haiku. Linking to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Mellow Curmudgeon
    Feb 06, 2022 @ 16:26:06

    Gr8 synergy with both the given haiku and the given image!

    Reply

  2. kaykuala
    Feb 04, 2022 @ 02:22:43

    It matched beautifully with Jane’s haiku, lynn!

    Hank

    Reply

  3. SelmaMartin
    Feb 04, 2022 @ 00:05:44

    Nice one. Love.

    Reply

  4. poetrybydebi
    Feb 03, 2022 @ 16:19:11

    A lovely addition to the haiku

    Reply

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