did you go rub that
balloon in your hair?
is that why it sticks
on the wall up there?
i don’t need your static
so please don’t touch me
ow! must you pass spark
of personal electricity?!
boys are such joys —
he laughs ecstatically
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A quadrille (44 words) for dVerse Poets pub. Mish hosts theme of “static” scene.
May 04, 2022 @ 14:27:46
It was so fun playing with static… a lot of fun sparking the ear of someone.
May 04, 2022 @ 17:19:40
…the voice of experience! 🙂
May 04, 2022 @ 13:05:32
Silly, Lynn! 😀 😀 😀
❤
David
May 04, 2022 @ 13:07:29
miles of smiles 😉
May 04, 2022 @ 12:26:19
So much fun! Not just boys though who do this!
May 04, 2022 @ 13:02:13
We only raised boys but I do remember doing the balloon trick myself 😀
May 04, 2022 @ 13:11:31
🤣
May 03, 2022 @ 10:36:01
This is splendid fun and reminds me of my kids when they were young. Love this! It’s the spontaneity that makes it so fun. ❤
May 03, 2022 @ 14:40:01
Glad you enjoyed it, Colleen! Thanks.
May 03, 2022 @ 15:49:49
You’re most welcome. ❤
May 03, 2022 @ 09:44:29
Such a fun write, Lynn! Boys are like that.
May 03, 2022 @ 14:39:12
Yes, thanks…we raised five boys 😀
May 03, 2022 @ 14:43:09
Oh wow! 😀
May 02, 2022 @ 23:27:33
I had completely forgotten about that little trick! This was a fun read. I enjoyed the sway of the rhyme and your different uses of “static”.
May 03, 2022 @ 07:56:31
Thanks, Mish…it’s interesting to see where a good prompt takes us!
May 02, 2022 @ 22:05:21
Such fun, Lynn. Boys are that. I know. God gave me two to raise for Him. 👏 💗 👏
May 03, 2022 @ 07:59:28
Thanks for your comment, Selma. Sons are special gifts!!