Joining in the fun at dVerse Poets where Lillian invites us to include flavors of Ben & Jerry’s ice cream in a poem…that’s NOT about ice cream 😉
Ever cool, Britannia shmoozes,
“hey, Sugar Plum, how about we go out
for some Miz Jelena’s sweet potato pie?”
“That dastardly mash for a late night snack?!”
She pauses, “but I could go for a cuppa coffee.”
“Coffee? Buzz, buzz, buzz”, he teases; (head
will feel like an urban jumble, he thinks). “Well,
change is brewing, take my arm and let’s go.”
Looking at the time, she mutters,
“Can’t believe you talk me into this
half-baked scheme at such an hour.
This is nuts!”
He pats her hand, winks and grins,
“Maybe we’ll order urban bourbon instead.
Goodbye, yellow brick road and hello Miz Jelena’s!”
Jul 28, 2022 @ 13:47:45
Delightful…how you wove all those prompts to craft an endearing tale!
Jul 29, 2022 @ 04:59:49
Thanks for stopping by…glad you liked it!
Jul 29, 2022 @ 08:30:33
You are welcome.
Jul 27, 2022 @ 22:14:33
They will sleep well tonight 😀
Jul 27, 2022 @ 15:22:54
nicely done getting so many flavours into a chat.
Jul 27, 2022 @ 11:17:21
This is a delight! Especially his comment about the coffee buzz buzz!!
Jul 29, 2022 @ 05:01:23
I appreciate your saying so, Helen!
Jul 27, 2022 @ 09:36:28
Love the whimsy! 👏👏
Jul 29, 2022 @ 05:00:18
Thanks, Tricia 🙂
Jul 29, 2022 @ 09:18:01
💖
Jul 27, 2022 @ 03:56:23
Genius. How fantastic. You used more than one eloquently. Wow. Perhaps you’re a summer person?! Nah, you’re just a well seasoned writer. Fantastic. 👏
Jul 27, 2022 @ 08:11:57
Oh, Selma, you are sweetly generous with your comments…glad you liked it!
Jul 27, 2022 @ 01:41:46
Fun write. Bravo
much💚love
Jul 27, 2022 @ 08:12:39
Thank you, Gillena…yours was a fun read too!
Jul 26, 2022 @ 21:34:39
We all need someone sometimes to take us by the arm and lead us someplace we would have missed otherwise, don’t we?
–Shay/Fireblossom
Jul 26, 2022 @ 21:47:54
It keeps life interesting anyway 😉
Jul 26, 2022 @ 18:49:14
Clever inclusions of the flavours via dialogue. Fun stuff.
Jul 26, 2022 @ 21:32:36
Thanks, Mish 🙂
Jul 26, 2022 @ 18:32:43
Hilarious and such a clever use of the prompt. I enjoyed the conversational style of this poem.
Jul 26, 2022 @ 21:33:21
Thanks for reading my scribbles…glad you like it!
Jul 26, 2022 @ 17:55:11
That was fantabulous!!
Jul 26, 2022 @ 21:33:48
Thank you, Dale 🙂
Jul 27, 2022 @ 07:46:52
🙂
Jul 26, 2022 @ 15:36:37
This is absolutely delightful! ❤❤ I so enjoyed this one, Lynn 😀
Jul 26, 2022 @ 16:12:06
I’m pleased you like it, Sanaa!
Jul 26, 2022 @ 15:23:31
You had a lot of fun with this one. Those flavors lend themselves to such poetry.
Jul 26, 2022 @ 16:11:40
Indeed! Thanks, Lisa 🙂
Jul 26, 2022 @ 21:29:29
You’re welcome 🙂
Jul 26, 2022 @ 14:59:22
I’m chuckling out loud at this conversation in your poem here. You’ve let your readers in on a fun little meeting between these two. LOVE how you piled on the flavors!!!
Jul 26, 2022 @ 15:19:50
Thanks for your generous comments, Lillian…glad you liked it!