the color of hope

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the color of hope must be soft white

like summer clouds puffing along

in cerulean sky which may gather

into dizzy-high cumulonimbus to

shudder and shower wet blessings

on thirsty fields and caked riverbeds

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the color of hope must be pale pink

like a newborn grandbaby’s tiny toes

wriggling with the joy of being bare

in the warm air to be tickled by grandpa

which soon grow nimble to run in grass

dotted with dandelions and butterflies

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the color of hope must be deep green

like a conifer forest on a mountainside

which exhales pine-scented oxygen to

support life of creatures that nest in

the upper boughs, tap bark for insects,

or rest quietly in cool daytime shadows

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Join dVerse Poets where we paint the colours of hope inspired by the poetry of Jen Feroze!

33 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta
    Jun 21, 2023 @ 12:46:31

    Beautiful Lynn ❤️

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  2. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith
    Jun 21, 2023 @ 07:20:57

    A lovely response, Lynn. Hope would be colored in the natural colors of the world. 😊

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  3. M Jay Dixit's avatar M Jay Dixit
    Jun 21, 2023 @ 01:22:01

    Beautiful take on the prompt!

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  4. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay
    Jun 20, 2023 @ 22:10:32

    I’d love to live in your poem.☁️🦶🌲

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  5. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    Jun 20, 2023 @ 21:50:57

    Beautiful colours of hope, Lynn, they certainly bring happiness.❤️

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  6. Becoming His Tapestry's avatar Becoming His Tapestry
    Jun 20, 2023 @ 21:21:45

    I love this Lynn. I can actually see the color of hope

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  7. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Jun 20, 2023 @ 18:08:39

    Nice selection of things that give you hope and make you happy!

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  8. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen
    Jun 20, 2023 @ 17:32:51

    Together these three colors create a beautiful rainbow of poetry!

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  9. Jim's avatar Jim
    Jun 20, 2023 @ 16:41:14

    So very clever, Lynn, giving Hope colors of natural things, I find that birds give me hope. They sure do have it themselves, we have some bringing up their babies under an eave.
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  10. kim881's avatar kim881
    Jun 20, 2023 @ 16:15:39

    I love the colours of your three things in your poem filled with hope, Lynn! Cloud watching is a great pastime, walking in the woods is such a pleasure, and babies’ toes are so cute. I’m with you on this.

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