the color of hope

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the color of hope must be soft white

like summer clouds puffing along

in cerulean sky which may gather

into dizzy-high cumulonimbus to

shudder and shower wet blessings

on thirsty fields and caked riverbeds

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the color of hope must be pale pink

like a newborn grandbaby’s tiny toes

wriggling with the joy of being bare

in the warm air to be tickled by grandpa

which soon grow nimble to run in grass

dotted with dandelions and butterflies

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the color of hope must be deep green

like a conifer forest on a mountainside

which exhales pine-scented oxygen to

support life of creatures that nest in

the upper boughs, tap bark for insects,

or rest quietly in cool daytime shadows

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Join dVerse Poets where we paint the colours of hope inspired by the poetry of Jen Feroze!

33 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. J M Negi's avatar J M Negi
    Jun 26, 2023 @ 07:46:16

    Beautiful lines. thanks.

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  2. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander
    Jun 22, 2023 @ 03:39:23

    like a newborn grandbaby’s tiny toes
    wriggling with the joy of being bare

    This is beyond lovely, Lynn ❤

    ~David

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  3. Stine Writing and Miniatures's avatar Stine Writing and Miniatures
    Jun 21, 2023 @ 20:01:26

    Perfectly lovely!

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  4. kaykuala's avatar kaykuala
    Jun 21, 2023 @ 19:39:39

    The colour of hope invariably comes at varying times that makes it fun to anticipate. You captured it very well Lynn!

    Hank

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  5. Jennifer Wagner's avatar Jennifer Wagner
    Jun 21, 2023 @ 16:34:23

    Your poem is a delicious breath of fresh air. The color of hope must be all these things!

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  6. cognacproject's avatar cognacproject
    Jun 21, 2023 @ 15:12:41

    Beautiful ❤

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