walking wounded

bitten by the snake,
poison circulates system.
venom on the tongue,
with desire to bite back.

why live on blade of bitterness?
if offender will not be offended;
yet stabbed more hearts than one
when chose another over dear son.

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Beloved, never avenge yourselves, but leave it to the wrath of God, for it is written,
“Vengeance is mine, I will repay, says the Lord.” (Romans 12:19, ESV)

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  1. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    May 16, 2024 @ 12:24:11

    How hard it is for a mother to see one’s child devastated thus. I like how with economy of words you wrote of betrayal so effectively.

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  2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli
    May 15, 2024 @ 21:01:51

    A mother always watches over her children, and it hurts her as much or more than the child is hurting to see them in pain. I’m sorry your son was hurt in such a way, Lynn.

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  3. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    May 15, 2024 @ 18:42:46

    Why? indeed! We only hurt ourselves. Well done, Lynn. I like your theological implications as well.

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  4. Dora's avatar dorahak
    May 15, 2024 @ 11:59:39

    That she “stabbed more hearts than onebrings a wider perspective on such a betrayal. And I love this sharply worded question “why live on blade of bitterness?” that not only emphasizes how the wounds linger but offer a way of healing. It’s hard for a mother to forgive such a pain inflicted on her child.

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