big blue

Etheree form: unrhymed without meter, one stanza of 10 lines, graduating from 1 to 10 syllables (Laura adds lines 11 & 12 with just 2 syllables each to give shape of Christmas tree). Linking to dverse poets

see
a spruce
in backyard
of childhood home
reaches for the clouds
shelter for nesting birds
hide-away for brown squirrels
branches thick and full to tree top
rises as blue neighborhood landmark
until it plays the part of lightning rod
and falls
blackened

26 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    Dec 09, 2024 @ 06:29:49

    A lovely Etheree tree!

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  2. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny
    Dec 06, 2024 @ 17:32:35

    I like that Christmas tree shape.

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  3. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox
    Dec 06, 2024 @ 13:55:36

    i feel sad for that tree

    Much❤️💚love

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  4. Laura Bloomsbury's avatar Laura Bloomsbury
    Dec 06, 2024 @ 03:54:42

    oh what an ending – a blue blue spruce indeed. but a very nice etheree tree indeed

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  5. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Dec 05, 2024 @ 22:15:11

    Sounds like a beautiful blue spruce! I love your description of the tree. It is sad when nature prunes our trees.

    I had a maple that got a long top branch blown out. I cut it back and left it and now it is much more beautiful than it would have been if left alone!

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  6. Grace's avatar Grace
    Dec 05, 2024 @ 20:09:27

    I am sad about the ending though it was a good twist.

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  7. Nancy's Notes 🖊️🎶's avatar Nancy (The Sicilian Storyteller)
    Dec 05, 2024 @ 18:51:49

    Sad ending for your tree. An unexpected twist done well!

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  8. Helen's avatar Helen
    Dec 05, 2024 @ 17:59:12

    Your tree has met with a sad ending, I enjoyed it nonetheless. Merry, Merry!!

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  9. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli
    Dec 05, 2024 @ 16:32:28

    Oh no. A special tree, taken by lightning 😦

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  10. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay
    Dec 05, 2024 @ 16:09:48

    Vivid imagery and wonderful use of those last two lines!

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