renga with basho

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai’s ”Renga Challenge” create a renga with haiku by Basho.


 

rainy season

sea glow lights held up

by the night watchman

pale koi bubble to surface

paddle junk into harbor

 

the blue sea

in waves smelling of saké

tonight’s full moon

sitting with friend on the beach

quietly sip from warm cup

 

on a bare branch

a crow settled down

autumn evening

vermillion koyo fallen

colors faded with sunset

 

 


Haiku © Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)           Renga response © lynn__

don’t label acrostic “junk”

 

Electronic messaging system is

Unknown

Got Mail!

Mixed blessing as too many

Appeals clutter the inbox

In a short time i’m

Literarily drowning!

 

 

 

 

Trying to explain why i’d love to “follow” nearly everyone online but cannot process all the messages!