paddling of ducks
mallard hatchlings learn to swim
fresh pack of quackers
plump covey of quail
rippling waves of prairie grass
breast speckled feathers
homing honks echo
a skein of canada geese
unravels the sky
Linking to dVerse poetics prompt…
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a poem in my pocket 
Feb 03, 2020 @ 02:28:20
That last stanza is lovely! Such a good image 🙂
Feb 03, 2020 @ 06:53:08
Thank you, Jane 🙂
Feb 03, 2020 @ 07:39:31
🙂
Apr 06, 2016 @ 16:09:56
Ah.. birds
hOld the
secret
of liFe..
flY
with gravity..
and trUly hUmans
frEE WiLL do this too..
invisible from prey and
predator.. human flys land..:)
Mar 24, 2016 @ 22:07:55
I love this, Lynn…especially the grand finale of geese at the end. 🙂
Mar 24, 2016 @ 22:09:24
😄
Mar 24, 2016 @ 07:07:28
I love the way you described each bird’s ways and homes! Wonderful!
Mar 23, 2016 @ 22:14:54
Three fun haikus, a trilogy Asian response; cool. Each one, as they should, could stand alone, but your avian thread works well. I dig the second haiku the most.
Mar 23, 2016 @ 16:56:59
Lovely Haikus. The last one is my favorite.
Mar 23, 2016 @ 17:01:03
😎
Mar 23, 2016 @ 09:47:01
I loved your haikus!
Mar 23, 2016 @ 09:55:18
Thanks for reading!
Mar 23, 2016 @ 09:32:51
Lovely imagery here, Lynn!
Mar 23, 2016 @ 09:54:19
Appreciate your comment 🙂
Mar 23, 2016 @ 08:59:10
plump covey of quail
rippling waves of prairie grass
Exquisite write ❤
Mar 23, 2016 @ 09:53:06
Thank you, Sanaa!
Mar 23, 2016 @ 07:59:47
Somehow they get along together to eat and play! Rightly so lynn!
Hank
Mar 23, 2016 @ 07:06:03
On wings of spring….I am looking forward to seeing those new baby birds and all kinds of creatures unraveling the sky ~ Well done Lynn ~
Mar 23, 2016 @ 07:25:07
Thank you, Grace…the way the wind is howling here, the birds must seek shelter today.
Mar 23, 2016 @ 00:46:38
Love the ducklings and the unraveled sky.
Mar 22, 2016 @ 22:12:51
“Fresh pack of quackers”…charming, Lynn, and a beautiful last stanza. Love your title too. 🙂
Mar 22, 2016 @ 22:16:26
So glad you liked it!
Mar 22, 2016 @ 22:12:42
“Fresh pack of quackers” is fantastic. And I LOVE “unravel they sky.”
Mar 22, 2016 @ 22:15:33
Thanks for your comment…and a great prompt 🙂
Mar 23, 2016 @ 00:52:34
Thank YOU. Loving everybody’s poems today!