weather…or not

A poem for the child in all of us 🙂

 

when winds blow mean

snowflakes scream

as they downstream fastimages

 

when no winds niggle

snowflakes giggle

as they squiggle past

22 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Bekkie Sanchez
    Mar 12, 2017 @ 20:45:55

    Simple yet fun!!

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  2. rosross
    Mar 10, 2017 @ 21:55:16

    Read it to a child. Or an adult. Lovely.

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Mar 10, 2017 @ 13:37:41

    Love the giggle of a snowflake.

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  4. MarinaSofia
    Mar 10, 2017 @ 03:02:54

    What a fun version of a haiku – my kids will love this one!

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  5. Nan Mykel
    Mar 09, 2017 @ 21:40:16

    Reblogged this on NANMYKEL.COM and commented:
    Marvelously spoken!

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  6. thotpurge
    Mar 09, 2017 @ 19:42:48

    Like those giggling snowflakes!

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  7. Glenn Buttkus
    Mar 09, 2017 @ 19:41:44

    In the matter of snow, I have no sense of humor–winter is not my favorite season. However, your few sweet lines make me grin, despite myself.

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  8. Grace
    Mar 09, 2017 @ 19:14:26

    Let the snowflakes giggle Lynn ~ Thanks for the fun poem ~

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  9. Bodhirose
    Mar 09, 2017 @ 19:12:12

    This speaks to the child in me too, Lynn. I’m glad I still have that childlike appreciation that can picture snowflakes giggling. Yes, they can!

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  10. Beverly Crawford
    Mar 09, 2017 @ 17:47:03

    This just snaps along, and leaves me smiling.

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  11. scotthastiepoet
    Mar 09, 2017 @ 17:21:42

    Delicious little piece -so fresh and fun too…

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  12. Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa)
    Mar 09, 2017 @ 16:11:58

    Charming write, Lynn ❤️ Love those snowflakes 🙂

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  13. Janice
    Mar 09, 2017 @ 11:50:32

    I like this: screaming and giggling snowflakes 🙂

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  14. Victoria C. Slotto
    Mar 03, 2017 @ 20:54:07

    This is so fun. Love those words–guess it’s the child in me!

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