when music soars away

 

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Magnetic “storm” quadrille, linking to De’s prompt at dVerse Poets.

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  1. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar Victoria C. Slotto
    Jun 07, 2017 @ 17:10:23

    To be able to write a poem this intense using magnetic poetry…amazing!

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  2. Sabio Lantz's avatar Sabio Lantz
    Jun 07, 2017 @ 06:25:33

    Like others, I have only phrases to compliment and I too will choose one:
    “though friends put me to lie is some mean bed”
    Very trippy. Wish I knew what any part was alluding too. But I guess dreams are like that.

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  3. Laura Bloomsbury's avatar Laura Bloomsbury
    Jun 07, 2017 @ 04:19:31

    your magnetic storm has pulled me in as a follower – luscious phrasing here

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  4. Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar thotpurge
    Jun 06, 2017 @ 23:27:28

    luscious rose rain..tell that to our grey grey monsoon clouds!!!! Must try this magnetic poetry thing soon. it seems pretty challenging!

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  5. areadingwriter's avatar rosemawrites
    Jun 06, 2017 @ 22:48:03

    woooah. rose rain. love that phrase a lot.

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  6. Victoria Young's avatar Victoria Young
    Jun 06, 2017 @ 20:08:46

    I like the swimming through death’s storm. Kind of makes me think of during the days of the black plaque – if you kept clean and did not attract rats then you wouldn’t get sick -swim through it. Love it!

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