Like others, I have only phrases to compliment and I too will choose one:
“though friends put me to lie is some mean bed”
Very trippy. Wish I knew what any part was alluding too. But I guess dreams are like that.
I like the swimming through death’s storm. Kind of makes me think of during the days of the black plaque – if you kept clean and did not attract rats then you wouldn’t get sick -swim through it. Love it!
Jun 07, 2017 @ 17:10:23
To be able to write a poem this intense using magnetic poetry…amazing!
Jun 07, 2017 @ 18:16:43
Thanks, Victoria 😊
Jun 07, 2017 @ 06:25:33
Like others, I have only phrases to compliment and I too will choose one:
“though friends put me to lie is some mean bed”
Very trippy. Wish I knew what any part was alluding too. But I guess dreams are like that.
Jun 07, 2017 @ 10:44:42
Perhaps “friends” who morbidly assume I’m dying 😵…definitely open to interpretation!
Jun 07, 2017 @ 04:19:31
your magnetic storm has pulled me in as a follower – luscious phrasing here
Jun 07, 2017 @ 10:39:50
Thanks…for the comment and the follow!
Jun 06, 2017 @ 23:27:28
luscious rose rain..tell that to our grey grey monsoon clouds!!!! Must try this magnetic poetry thing soon. it seems pretty challenging!
Jun 07, 2017 @ 10:37:57
A fun challenge for sure!
Jun 06, 2017 @ 22:48:03
woooah. rose rain. love that phrase a lot.
Jun 06, 2017 @ 20:08:46
I like the swimming through death’s storm. Kind of makes me think of during the days of the black plaque – if you kept clean and did not attract rats then you wouldn’t get sick -swim through it. Love it!
Jun 06, 2017 @ 21:31:08
Thank you so much, Victoria!