This is my attempt at a “lai”. You can learn more about the form at dVerse…
look out my window
garden plants on row
i see
green beans, potato,
snap peas, tomato
must weed
good seeds that we sow
cause blessings to grow
freely
photo by lynn
a garden lai
08 Jun 2017 38 Comments
in Uncategorized Tags: blessings, garden, lai, seeds
a poem in my pocket 
Jun 11, 2017 @ 00:36:00
Such a delightful read! A very beautiful poem.
Jun 11, 2017 @ 07:07:36
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Jun 11, 2017 @ 07:19:50
No problem at all!
Jun 09, 2017 @ 15:24:28
There’s something about this form that produces brisk, no nonsense poems. I like your notes to self and imagine the plants standing to attention in their rows.
Jun 09, 2017 @ 20:46:19
Yes 😉
Jun 10, 2017 @ 03:50:05
🙂