Magnetic “storm” quadrille, linking to De’s prompt at dVerse Poets.
when music soars away
06 Jun 2017 34 Comments
in magnetic Tags: death, dreaing, peaches, rain, rose, storm
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a poem in my pocket 
Jun 06, 2017 @ 17:18:26
This is absolutely kick-ass stunning! 😀 I wish I had written this! ❤️
Jun 06, 2017 @ 17:24:47
Ha, Sanaa…thank you, I actually considered removing it but now 😀
Jun 06, 2017 @ 10:40:33
The first line is so gorgeous…’luscious rose rain’ wow!
Jun 06, 2017 @ 11:07:46
Thank you, Sumana.
Jun 06, 2017 @ 09:32:42
Lynn!!! I LOVE this. Nothing better than a magnetic quadrille! 🙂
“my mad crush over peaches” has me swooning, and that storm at the end…wonderful.
Jun 06, 2017 @ 11:05:08
What’s not to love about a fresh
Jun 06, 2017 @ 11:06:13
…peach 🤗
Jun 06, 2017 @ 09:19:49
As one who lives without TV, I was drawn to that line. I think the world is rubbed raw by the TV man’s tongue (include TV women here as well!). A powerful poem all around.
Jun 06, 2017 @ 11:03:55
Thanks, we don’t have TV in our home either…but seems it is everywhere else.
Jun 07, 2017 @ 07:15:04
Worse than Lyme Disease… or fidget spinners.
Jun 07, 2017 @ 10:45:25
Ha…agree!
Jun 06, 2017 @ 09:04:30
As magnets the words seemed to be blowing in the wind. I liked the last line about swimming through death’s storm.
Jun 06, 2017 @ 10:58:35
I appreciate your comments here.
Jun 06, 2017 @ 08:14:45
Lather raw … Magnetic poetry pulls together such wonderful phrases! This sparkles!
Jun 06, 2017 @ 08:40:02
I didn’t feel “sparkly” but thanks 😀
Jun 06, 2017 @ 09:39:15
Hmmm – let’s go buy some sparklers and swirl them around on a dark night while reading this 🙂 (The wildness of this prompt makes me want to do crazy stuff!)
Jun 06, 2017 @ 07:35:52
“Luscious rose rain”…I can smell that. Very nice.
Jun 06, 2017 @ 08:39:22
My favorite phrase in this one… thank you!
Jun 06, 2017 @ 06:54:43
I love that luscious rose rain ~ Have stayed away from TV nowadays ~
Jun 06, 2017 @ 07:01:50
Television annoys me…
Jun 06, 2017 @ 06:00:30
“…lucious rose rain…”. Love that phrase!
Jun 06, 2017 @ 07:02:35
Yes, those words fell together…thanks
Jun 06, 2017 @ 01:22:48
Ah… sometimes we need to look away from the TV screen.