A triolet is a French form of 8 lines with ABaAabAB repetition…for dVerse MTB
wet scarlet leaves carpet cold ground
embraced with dew and kissed by mist
hidden in fog, pumpkins lie ’round
wet scarlet leaves carpet cold ground
ghost cows graze cornfield, make no sound
where earth meets sky in phantom tryst
wet scarlet leaves carpet cold ground
embraced with dew and kissed by mist
Gina
Oct 29, 2018 @ 09:30:59
you created a feeling of being kissed by nature’s love and wrapped in a warm embrace after the cold – so very lovely
Waltermarks
Oct 28, 2018 @ 16:21:11
It makes me feel like I’m on the ranch, in a foggy morning, tiptoein through the cow pies, a memorable experience! ๐
lynn__
Oct 28, 2018 @ 17:25:14
C’mon in for some apple cider ๐
Frank Hubeny
Oct 27, 2018 @ 16:09:21
Nice sound and nice last line.
Grace
Oct 27, 2018 @ 15:03:02
Such a lovely autumn triolet Lynn!
lynn__
Oct 27, 2018 @ 17:19:18
Thanks, Grace
V.J. Knutson
Oct 27, 2018 @ 08:29:48
Beautiful snapshot
rothpoetry
Oct 26, 2018 @ 16:29:16
The covered ground is a sign that winter is just around the corner!
Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg)
Oct 26, 2018 @ 15:51:37
Love a triolet… it used to be my favorite for, but such a long time since I wrote one.
lynn__
Oct 26, 2018 @ 16:16:07
I have not written many but am pleased how this turned out ๐
jillys2016
Oct 26, 2018 @ 15:16:05
Hooray for the triolet! The sound devices in this are just wonderful. Kissed by mist – nice!
lynn__
Oct 26, 2018 @ 15:19:17
Thanks for your comment…and a great prompt!