A triolet is a French form of 8 lines with ABaAabAB repetition…for dVerse MTB
wet scarlet leaves carpet cold ground
embraced with dew and kissed by mist
hidden in fog, pumpkins lie ’round
wet scarlet leaves carpet cold ground
ghost cows graze cornfield, make no sound
where earth meets sky in phantom tryst
wet scarlet leaves carpet cold ground
embraced with dew and kissed by mist
Oct 29, 2018 @ 09:30:59
you created a feeling of being kissed by nature’s love and wrapped in a warm embrace after the cold – so very lovely
Oct 28, 2018 @ 16:21:11
It makes me feel like I’m on the ranch, in a foggy morning, tiptoein through the cow pies, a memorable experience! ๐
Oct 28, 2018 @ 17:25:14
C’mon in for some apple cider ๐
Oct 27, 2018 @ 16:09:21
Nice sound and nice last line.
Oct 27, 2018 @ 15:03:02
Such a lovely autumn triolet Lynn!
Oct 27, 2018 @ 17:19:18
Thanks, Grace
Oct 27, 2018 @ 08:29:48
Beautiful snapshot
Oct 26, 2018 @ 16:29:16
The covered ground is a sign that winter is just around the corner!
Oct 26, 2018 @ 15:51:37
Love a triolet… it used to be my favorite for, but such a long time since I wrote one.
Oct 26, 2018 @ 16:16:07
I have not written many but am pleased how this turned out ๐
Oct 26, 2018 @ 15:16:05
Hooray for the triolet! The sound devices in this are just wonderful. Kissed by mist – nice!
Oct 26, 2018 @ 15:19:17
Thanks for your comment…and a great prompt!