deep waters

lagoon in my memories
fills dormant volcano crater;
nicaraguan vendors encircle
tourists as mountains surround
deep blue pocket of aquatic life.

lagoon of my memories
fills crevices of heart and mind;
as faces from childhood encircle
present experience, surrounding
deeply personal perspective on life.

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Quadrille (44 words) linked to Melissa’s prompt at dVerse poets on “lagoon”.

29 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    Jan 18, 2024 @ 10:13:26

    Lagoon of memories…how wonderful, Lynn! What a lovely take.

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  2. Nicole Horlings's avatar Nicole Horlings
    Jan 10, 2024 @ 15:13:50

    Great poem! You described the scene with the tourists and vendors quite well.

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  3. Anita's avatar Anita
    Jan 10, 2024 @ 06:01:22

    Lagoons bring beautiful memories.
    It truly is a perspective of life & also a home for so many animals.
    Well expressed

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  4. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander
    Jan 10, 2024 @ 03:44:00

    Lynn, this is a beautiful exploration of memories, skillfully intertwining Nicaraguan landscapes with personal recollections. The imagery of a dormant volcano transformed into a lagoon mirrors the way memories fill the heart and mind…

    ~David

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  5. Grace's avatar Grace
    Jan 09, 2024 @ 20:42:38

    Love the creative use of the prompt word: lagoon of my memories.

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