the space between

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remembering the
daughter she never knew;
today is another anniversary of
the day she was removed…
from her womb, from her life,
but never from her mother’s heart.

asking questions like what color
are her eyes? does she look like me?
wishing she could hug her girl
and ask for forgiveness;
who knew? a mother died too.

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Linking to dVerse poets where Punam invites us to write ekphrastic poetry inspired by Indian artwork.

15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Jennifer Wagner's avatar Jennifer Wagner
    May 14, 2026 @ 15:00:17

    Oh my goodness, this moved my heart and gave me goosebumps. ❤

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  2. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    May 13, 2026 @ 15:11:32

    Lynn, this took an unexpected turn and is very moving. “wishing she could hug her girl and ask for forgiveness”, very poignant lines

    It is amazing how art can speak to each one of us differently.

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    May 13, 2026 @ 12:47:26

    It will hurt

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  4. Helen's avatar Helen
    May 13, 2026 @ 12:00:01

    Your interpretion of the art was unexpected, and beautifully delivered.

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  5. M Jay Dixit's avatar M Jay Dixit
    May 13, 2026 @ 01:33:30

    💔

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  6. carolinestreetblog's avatar carolinestreetblog
    May 13, 2026 @ 00:57:41

    Well written, Lynn. This pulls at the heartstrings.

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  7. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    May 12, 2026 @ 20:23:32

    Very well done, Lynn!

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  8. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox
    May 12, 2026 @ 16:32:55

    So sad

    much love

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