reflection on aging

Raymond McIntyre – Flowers with a Mirror (1968)

we plead, “mirror, mirror, upon the wall”
like vanity before snow white’s death fall
“what have you done to me? that’s not my face!”
bouquet of flowered beauty –not a trace
youth’s pink blush gone, now yellowing appears
and sleek combed hair sticks up in fern-like spears
sweet bloom arranged in lovely china vase
reflecting back some weedy basket case!
what once were tender buds, no blossoms brag
where perky petals peeked, dry sepals sag
sketchy mirror, you lie! –won’t tolerate
image alone does not determine fate
perhaps the mirror does reveal true age
but real wisdom’s grateful to reach this stage.


Linking to Melissa’s Fandango Flash Fiction challenge…check it out!

acrostic plus

G rumbling won’t improve your mood
R emember to count all blessings good
O pportunities abound to appreciate
W onders around you, small and great
I nterest shown to those you love
N oticed here and up above
G od cares about heart attitude

if you find yourself doing life sol O
to meet new friends presents a goa L
pursue that hobby you never trie D
take the time to enjoy the rid E
you aren’t getting any younge R


Lillian proposes a puzzle poem so here’s an acrostic plus for dVerse poets today…

gone to seed

 

slender, elegant

aged with grace and dignity

wears white hair like crown

 

 

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photo by lynn

 

life’s rough edges

With precious memories of my husband’s mother, Tillie

 

languid, slowed-down flight

faded tiger swallowtail

wings frayed, summer’s end

 

aging farmwife rests

memories bound in wheelchair

mind frays as years pass

 

love sees the beauty

blond boy sings in gramma’s lap

fray with long goodbye

 

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