water washing clean- a sign
overflowing cup is mine
miracle of his design
grafted fruit of father’s vine
spirit-pressed agape wine
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Artwork entitled “Aquarian Patterns” by Cheryl Kellar
posting poetic prose
30 Apr 2014 9 Comments
in Uncategorized Tags: miracle, water, wine
water washing clean- a sign
overflowing cup is mine
miracle of his design
grafted fruit of father’s vine
spirit-pressed agape wine
____________
Artwork entitled “Aquarian Patterns” by Cheryl Kellar
May 01, 2014 @ 16:57:24
Excellent use of words. Tight, controlled with the images implying more than the words themselves and giving depth and texture to the illustration. This does what poems should do. Remove one word and the work would collapse!
May 01, 2014 @ 03:36:10
cool verse!
Apr 30, 2014 @ 22:31:25
Yes, we need more ‘true’ love, no just the words that actions don’t match…
Apr 30, 2014 @ 11:34:09
agape – we need more of that.. only way to bridge the color borders.
Apr 30, 2014 @ 10:30:55
i tend to agree with claudia…i think more people love themselves these days…esp those that claim to know the Father then do not follow his commands or seem to care about or invest in others.
Apr 30, 2014 @ 10:06:39
I feel the deep spiritual undertones, the overflowing of cup from the father’s wine ~
Terrific imagery ~ Thanks for participating and wishing you Happy Week ~
Apr 30, 2014 @ 07:29:31
great rhythm and rhyme here… sweet write
Apr 30, 2014 @ 05:24:38
this read like a sip of a sweet clear wine.
Apr 30, 2014 @ 04:30:41
if there only way more of this agape love in the world…the overflowing plays well with cheryl’s waves on the paintings…