thirst no more



water washing clean- a sign

overflowing cup is mine

miracle of his design

grafted fruit of father’s vine

spirit-pressed agape wine



Artwork entitled “Aquarian Patterns” by Cheryl Kellar



9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Gay Reiser Cannon
    May 01, 2014 @ 16:57:24

    Excellent use of words. Tight, controlled with the images implying more than the words themselves and giving depth and texture to the illustration. This does what poems should do. Remove one word and the work would collapse!


  2. kkkkaty1
    May 01, 2014 @ 03:36:10

    cool verse!


  3. freyathewriter
    Apr 30, 2014 @ 22:31:25

    Yes, we need more ‘true’ love, no just the words that actions don’t match…


  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Apr 30, 2014 @ 11:34:09

    agape – we need more of that.. only way to bridge the color borders.


  5. bmiller007 (@bmiller007)
    Apr 30, 2014 @ 10:30:55

    i tend to agree with claudia…i think more people love themselves these days…esp those that claim to know the Father then do not follow his commands or seem to care about or invest in others.


  6. Grace
    Apr 30, 2014 @ 10:06:39

    I feel the deep spiritual undertones, the overflowing of cup from the father’s wine ~

    Terrific imagery ~ Thanks for participating and wishing you Happy Week ~


  7. Anthony Desmond (@iamEPanthony)
    Apr 30, 2014 @ 07:29:31

    great rhythm and rhyme here… sweet write


  8. billgncs
    Apr 30, 2014 @ 05:24:38

    this read like a sip of a sweet clear wine.


  9. claudia
    Apr 30, 2014 @ 04:30:41

    if there only way more of this agape love in the world…the overflowing plays well with cheryl’s waves on the paintings…


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