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Lost Moments  2012 artwork by Nick Gentry

Lost Moments 2012
artwork by Nick Gentry

it was the hot summer of ’59

the heat dragged on and on;

migrants sweated in the fields,

youth rumbled in parking lots

after cruising’ saturday night.

bobby left me for a prettier girl

but i didn’t care;  i’d have a

smoke, quick slick a rat tail

comb thru my cropped hair

and find me a better boy,

one who really understood

what was inside me, yeah.

 

 

Thanks to Nick Gentry, http://www.nickgentry.com

for sharing his artistic inspiration with d’Verse poets today.

17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. M's avatar grapeling
    Jan 10, 2015 @ 13:04:27

    love the voice in this, Lynn ~

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  2. Mish's avatar mishunderstood
    Jan 08, 2015 @ 22:46:35

    I like the cool, casual attitude in this poem…and it matches well with the artwork. 🙂

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  3. Ginny Karpinski Brannan's avatar Ginny Karpinski Brannan
    Jan 08, 2015 @ 11:33:30

    I like where your words went with this, especially since the title is “Lost Moments.” You have truly captured one with your words.

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  4. katiemiafrederick's avatar katiemiafrederick
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 23:33:38

    The power of believing in oneself when started young like this can make a difference in living life or just life.. a strong character replayed in life! 🙂

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  5. Debi's avatar georgeplace2013
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 11:45:27

    I love the moment of frozen time…. and the strength and sassiness of the girl.

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