nonet: stanza(s) of nine lines, each with increasing # of syllables (1-9) dVerse poetics
warm
days of
november
probably past
colder times ahead
forecast fog, wet grey rain
free- zing an- ti- ci- pa- tion
smell of manure spread on bare fields
trees’ silhouettes swallowed by swift night
Nov 20, 2015 @ 20:33:18
I love how you can take all these different poem structures and make them your own! I especially like the last line “swallowed by swift night.” It really captures the way night comes so quickly this time of year.
Nov 20, 2015 @ 20:39:37
Hi Connie…and thank you!
Nov 13, 2015 @ 07:30:37
Ah lovely–I especially like the closing line of night swallowing the fields/ trees/ manure! Thanks, Lynn. k.
Nov 12, 2015 @ 13:43:24
Very good use of form here. I especially like line seven. It’s just fun to read!
Nov 11, 2015 @ 20:11:10
Nice form for this! I so like the photo as well. I remember when visiting family in the country and that manure smell. Great use of the nonet form!
Nov 11, 2015 @ 18:27:20
The nonet form definitely works with your words–I’m looking forward to one in reverse ending with one word, Spring. Nicely done.
Nov 11, 2015 @ 18:17:38
You had me smiling at spreading manure…memories when I lived closer to farmlands.
Nov 11, 2015 @ 15:54:49
I truly am trying not to dread Winter!
Nov 11, 2015 @ 14:16:17
Oh such an intriguing form this is and you have executed it soo beautifully 😀
Lovely write 🙂
Nov 11, 2015 @ 11:37:03
We’ve had some warm days at the beginning of November, but alas, you are right, those warm days are likely gone now until Spring.
Nov 11, 2015 @ 10:48:36
November green.. colors
mixing with bare
limbs.. human
mixing too..
bare and
color
us
new..
South seasons
grow colors bright
human light snows white..:)
Oh yes.. and hi Lynn..
still now close
to the end
my friend now
always inspiring
words from me..;)
Nov 11, 2015 @ 10:37:50
So clever how you used dashes two separate freezing anticipation. Somehow that gave me a chilling feeling, maybe because everything seems to slow down in the cold. Enjoy the warm weather while you have it.
Nov 11, 2015 @ 08:29:20
Haven’t tried the nonet form for a while, smiles ~ I love the warm early November days but surely as night, it is becoming colder ~
Nov 11, 2015 @ 08:01:47
Sigh – this poem expresses the way it is here too, Lynn. That warm November weather was wonderful while it lasted. Freezing is definitely now on the horizon.