blues on a window(pain)

Linking “cloud” quadrille (44 word poem) with dVerse Poets…(photo by lynn)


monday mood

in layers of grey

lowering, glowering

clouds are shrouds

for secret fears

and private tears

as each soul

only knows of

its own sorrows;

cannot fathom another’s

though true sisters/brothers

might try to sigh

with kindred spirit’s cry

in overcast



“Each heart knows its own bitterness…  ” -Proverbs 14:10

37 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. erbiage
    Nov 02, 2016 @ 15:32:30

    Oo I like the soundscapes your words engender. Almost wish I didn’t like this sort of gloom so much


  2. claudia
    Oct 15, 2016 @ 07:40:43

    empathy is something wonderful – and it is great when there are friends who just listen and are there in difficult cloudy times… beautifully penned


  3. writerwannabe763
    Oct 12, 2016 @ 22:04:36

    So much truth and feeling in these words… Diane


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