whispered in forest

 

breathe clear mountain air

camp beneath whispering

pines listen to nocturnal

noise as whispers of clouds

shadow dance with haloed moon

campfire embers glow while

smoke-curl whispers spiral up

i welcome irresistible tickle

when you whisper soft into ear

warm touch overwhelms words

 


Joining De and dVerse Poets at the pub for a round of quadrilles…

30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Rosemary Nissen-Wade's avatar Rosemary Nissen-Wade
    Jan 28, 2017 @ 20:33:39

    A delightful moment, obviously!

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  2. C.C.'s avatar C.C.
    Jan 20, 2017 @ 21:36:16

    Nothing better than a moment like that, outside in nature beside a campfire 🙂

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  3. MarinaSofia's avatar MarinaSofia
    Jan 20, 2017 @ 06:02:20

    Wildly romantic moment – loving nature description and then that warm, fuzzy ending!

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  4. paulscribbles's avatar paul scribbles
    Jan 19, 2017 @ 05:00:03

    Set up so well for the climax .

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  5. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar Victoria C. Slotto
    Jan 17, 2017 @ 19:38:24

    How fun. I can almost smell the campfire and pine trees thanks to your descriptions.

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  6. writerwannabe763's avatar writerwannabe763
    Jan 17, 2017 @ 18:54:03

    I love the flow of each line into the next one… Diane

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  7. whippetwisdom's avatar whippetwisdom
    Jan 17, 2017 @ 12:55:11

    Whispering pines in the mountain air – lovely! :o)

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  8. Walter J. Wojtanik's avatar Walter J. Wojtanik
    Jan 17, 2017 @ 09:17:53

    Each glimpse your offer is very visual and combined, paint a wonderful picture, Lynn! I love this whisper!

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