whispered in forest

 

breathe clear mountain air

camp beneath whispering

pines listen to nocturnal

noise as whispers of clouds

shadow dance with haloed moon

campfire embers glow while

smoke-curl whispers spiral up

i welcome irresistible tickle

when you whisper soft into ear

warm touch overwhelms words

 


Joining De and dVerse Poets at the pub for a round of quadrilles…

30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Frank Hubeny's avatar frankhubeny
    Jan 17, 2017 @ 08:45:39

    I remember how pines can whisper when walking through a pine forest and how the nights are not as silent as they are sometimes dark.

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  2. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi
    Jan 17, 2017 @ 08:09:30

    whispers of clouds shadow dance with haloed moon… oh yes!!❤️

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  3. Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar thotpurge
    Jan 17, 2017 @ 07:39:49

    pines, clouds, smoke..the whispers are everywhere!!

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  4. kim881's avatar kim881
    Jan 17, 2017 @ 04:18:41

    A tickling whisper in the ear – ooh shivers!

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 16, 2017 @ 23:27:12

    Whisper tickle and ear.. what a wonderful combo

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  6. maria's avatar maria
    Jan 16, 2017 @ 22:32:36

    Aww.. take me there, please!!

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  7. Victoria Young's avatar Victoria Young
    Jan 16, 2017 @ 21:27:34

    The pines do whisper. I always feel uplifted when I’m under one. I really love this poem and all the whispers in it.

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  8. whimsygizmo's avatar whimsygizmo
    Jan 16, 2017 @ 20:39:33

    Love all those whispers within…

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  9. areadingwriter's avatar rosemawrites
    Jan 16, 2017 @ 20:32:32

    awwww. soooo good.

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  10. Grace's avatar Grace
    Jan 16, 2017 @ 20:18:14

    Such a lovely place to be – and who can resist that tickle in one’s hear, smiles ~

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