breathe clear mountain air
camp beneath whispering
pines listen to nocturnal
noise as whispers of clouds
shadow dance with haloed moon
campfire embers glow while
smoke-curl whispers spiral up
i welcome irresistible tickle
when you whisper soft into ear
warm touch overwhelms words
Joining De and dVerse Poets at the pub for a round of quadrilles…
Jan 28, 2017 @ 20:33:39
A delightful moment, obviously!
Jan 20, 2017 @ 21:36:16
Nothing better than a moment like that, outside in nature beside a campfire 🙂
Jan 20, 2017 @ 23:19:04
For sure!
Jan 20, 2017 @ 06:02:20
Wildly romantic moment – loving nature description and then that warm, fuzzy ending!
Jan 20, 2017 @ 07:52:20
Thanks for your comment!
Jan 19, 2017 @ 05:00:03
Set up so well for the climax .
Jan 17, 2017 @ 19:38:24
How fun. I can almost smell the campfire and pine trees thanks to your descriptions.
Jan 17, 2017 @ 21:40:52
Yes, I want to go there 😁
Jan 18, 2017 @ 12:16:21
May be a wee bit cold right now!
Jan 18, 2017 @ 13:44:19
True! 😄
Jan 17, 2017 @ 18:54:03
I love the flow of each line into the next one… Diane
Jan 17, 2017 @ 21:38:54
Thanks, Diane!
Jan 17, 2017 @ 12:55:11
Whispering pines in the mountain air – lovely! :o)
Jan 17, 2017 @ 09:17:53
Each glimpse your offer is very visual and combined, paint a wonderful picture, Lynn! I love this whisper!
Jan 17, 2017 @ 09:41:13
Thank you, Walt 😊