let’s amble down dirt path
thru bramble in the woods
we’ll ramble like a poem
hear rumble of the thunder
don’t bumble over tree roots
or stumble where you roam
step nimble-ly while hiking
hold thimble compass steady
star symbol guides us home
Linking with Linda Lee Lyberg at dVerse poets to write quadrille (44-words) on “among the brambles” theme. Enjoy the berries but beware of snakes!
a poem in my pocket 
Dec 09, 2020 @ 20:01:44
Pretty clever!
Dec 10, 2020 @ 05:58:58
thanks 🙂
Dec 10, 2020 @ 06:03:53
De nada!
Aug 19, 2020 @ 14:29:32
I really like your beautiful blog. A pleasure to come stroll on your pages. A great discovery and a very interesting blog. I will come back to visit you. Do not hesitate to visit my universe. See you soon. 🙂
Aug 19, 2020 @ 15:54:06
Thank you, Angelilie, for visiting and commenting here! I will check out your blog as well 🙂
Jul 28, 2020 @ 21:10:22
I really love the rhyming within each sentence. It makes the whole poem flow nicely.
Jul 27, 2020 @ 22:20:00
wow Lynn I like that you planted the rhyme within the line instead of at the end, most effective! It has a pleasant rhythm
Jul 28, 2020 @ 10:54:31
Glad you liked it…thanks, Kate 🙂
Jul 28, 2020 @ 16:03:11
my pleasure!