rambling rhyme

 

let’s amble down dirt path
thru bramble in the woods
we’ll ramble like a poem

hear rumble of the thunder
don’t bumble over tree roots
or stumble where you roam

step nimble-ly while hiking
hold thimble compass steady
star symbol guides us home

 


Linking with Linda Lee Lyberg at dVerse poets to write quadrille (44-words) on “among the brambles” theme.  Enjoy the berries but beware of snakes!

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Stine Writing
    Jul 28, 2020 @ 21:10:22

    I really love the rhyming within each sentence. It makes the whole poem flow nicely.

    Reply

  2. calmkate
    Jul 27, 2020 @ 22:20:00

    wow Lynn I like that you planted the rhyme within the line instead of at the end, most effective! It has a pleasant rhythm

    Reply

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