lagoon in my memories
fills dormant volcano crater;
nicaraguan vendors encircle
tourists as mountains surround
deep blue pocket of aquatic life.
lagoon of my memories
fills crevices of heart and mind;
as faces from childhood encircle
present experience, surrounding
deeply personal perspective on life.
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Quadrille (44 words) linked to Melissa’s prompt at dVerse poets on “lagoon”.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 19:47:42
Thanks for bringing such a wonderful imagination. Love it ❤️
Jan 09, 2024 @ 20:01:21
I appreciate your lovely comment, Brenda ❤
Jan 09, 2024 @ 17:52:01
Love the lagoon being compared to a pool of memories!
Jan 09, 2024 @ 19:30:14
Thanks for reading 🙂
Jan 09, 2024 @ 14:48:13
I am reflecting back these lines with appreciation.
“lagoon of my memories
fills crevices of heart and mind;”
Jan 09, 2024 @ 17:07:00
Thank you, Ali.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 14:37:58
You remind me that each of us and the other 10,000 things are a unique convergence of atoms and experiences. I like how you used the prompt word.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 17:08:12
I like the word convergence 🙂 Thank you, Lisa.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 19:00:16
You’re welcome 🙂
Jan 09, 2024 @ 14:21:00
The lagoon as a metaphor for the reshaping pool of memories is very apt.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 17:08:32
Thanks, Bjorn.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 13:56:56
Love the deep water of memories Lynn 💞
Jan 09, 2024 @ 13:32:14
Quadrilagoonically good. Thanks.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 17:09:34
Ha, ha, i like the new word you coined, Ron 😀
Jan 09, 2024 @ 13:12:05
I love the idea of a lagoon of memories, Lynn.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 17:10:13
It feels deep and full, Kim!
Jan 09, 2024 @ 13:06:41
I love how you relate the idea of “deep waters” of memories “surrounding
deeply personal perspective on life” in terms of a lagoon. Lovely quadrille, Lynn.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 17:10:41
I appreciate your thoughtful comment, Dora.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 12:51:13
I love how so many people wrote about memories rustled up by lagoon. A lagoon in a volcano crater in Nicaragua sounds like an amazing sight to see.
Jan 09, 2024 @ 17:11:28
It was beautiful!