sweat & muscle

Rambling of a Writer prompt (work & horse) in shadorma form (3-5-3-3-7-5). 


 

red horse barn

farmer who lived large

worked his team

draft belgians

cutting hay, riding parade

black and silver tack

 

workhorse

 

In memory of Rus V.Z. and Harold V.K.   (Image from trustworkz.com)

 

 

dark shadorma

A shadorma is a 6 line poem with 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllable counts. 


 

 

in shadow

motivation comes

suicide

double death

why two lovers hate themselves?

asphyxiation

 

 

 


Many years ago, a teenage co-worker, Barry, and his girlfriend died together in his car running inside a garage. I still sadly wonder…why? Tonight, we discuss suicide at NAMI support group.

 

logo-napowrimo

affluenza

 

 

temptation

when food becomes god

resisting

relapsing

(giving up chocolate for lent?)

disordered eating

 

 

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A shadorma poem (Spanish form) of 6 lines with 3-5-3-3-7-5 syllable count.

loud rowdy blues

Linking to Eliot Dybden’s Shadorma November at Along the Interstice. A shadorma has six lines with no rhyme or meter, except for a syllable structure of 3/5/3/3/7/5.

 

bluejay punks

images

public domain

nab spilt corn kernels

feathered flash

raucous caws

gather together in grove

living thanksgiving

 

umbrella forgotten

 

mud puddles

announce spring is here

splash outdoors

jump to rhymes

“rain in spain falls on the plain”

yellow raincoat joy

 


The “shadorma” is a poetic form consisting of a six-line stanza (or sestet). The form is alleged to have originated in Spain. Each stanza has a syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5 for a total of 26 syllables. A poem may consist of one stanza, or a series.  Link to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.