it was almost morning,
half moon and venus were
still hanging at the star bar
watching the world turn.
“earth, ain’t she a beauty?!”
half moon commented.
“she really is, considering
her age,” venus had to agree.
“she’s weathered many storms
in her years…whatcha think
about this global warming?”
“i’m not convinced, seems
earth’s weather has always
been a bit unpredictable…

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(sigh) i’m not sure people
are as wise and powerful
as they imagine they are.”
half moon chuckles, “well,
looks like sun’s gonna close
this place down…alright
if i walk you home?”
Apr 07, 2019 @ 15:13:38
I tend to agree with your perception on this one! The answer is in the moon and stars! Only time will tell!
Apr 07, 2019 @ 16:27:17
Thanks, Dwight π
Apr 05, 2019 @ 14:34:43
This was celestial romantic, loved it!
Apr 05, 2019 @ 22:07:39
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading π
Apr 05, 2019 @ 13:26:24
This was whimsical and clever Lynn. The vehicle of light conversation can be effective in presenting a point of view regarding something as heavy as climate change. For example: βnot sure people are as wise and powerful as they imagine they are.β I would continue: βespecially those ignoring the science.β
Apr 05, 2019 @ 22:09:19
Thanks for sharing your view, Rob π
Apr 05, 2019 @ 04:06:55
I can hear that half moon chuckling, Lynn!
Apr 05, 2019 @ 09:08:35
π
Apr 04, 2019 @ 19:11:24
How delightful and whimsical is this!!
Apr 04, 2019 @ 20:55:12
Glad you liked it π
Apr 04, 2019 @ 17:51:38
I like the creativity in this poem. Well done.
Apr 04, 2019 @ 20:55:27
Thank you!
Apr 04, 2019 @ 15:57:29
I would love it if the moon walked me home! β€οΈ Exquisite write, Lynn π
Apr 04, 2019 @ 20:56:35
Thanks, Sanaa β€
Apr 04, 2019 @ 15:37:40
I love the conversational form of this piece. Venus may have a cosmic view of things, but too many nay-sayers on global warming are putting heads in the sand.
Apr 04, 2019 @ 20:57:38
Glad you stopped by to read and comment, Glenn.
Apr 04, 2019 @ 15:10:17
An imaginative poem! Funny and yet, not funny
Apr 04, 2019 @ 20:59:07
Glad you liked it, Toni.