parenthetically speaking

please do not
puncture my poetry
with unwanted or
wanton punctuation

commas i suppose
are required for prose
but totally unnecessary
for terse purple verse

better to be clean
in your cummings
and goings than to
leave a blot or dot

and if you cannot
decide where to pause
feel free to break laws
but be warned that

the punctuation police
are determined to deter
any pregnant poets
who miss a period


Melissa hosts poetics at dVerse and prompts us to write sans punctuation

30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. brazannemuse's avatar brazannemuse
    Jun 10, 2026 @ 13:20:22

    This is clever and funny Lynn, loved it 💞Suzanne

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  2. Maggie C's avatar Maggie C
    Jun 10, 2026 @ 11:43:43

    What a fun read! I was anticipating a pregnant pause and instead got a missed period.

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  3. shaun tenzenmen's avatar shaun tenzenmen
    Jun 10, 2026 @ 07:46:28

    A very fun read Lynn. I’m sure you were chuckling to yourself as you were writing it. 👏

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  4. kim881's avatar kim881
    Jun 10, 2026 @ 06:45:15

    These lines in particular made me smile, Lynn:

    ‘better to be clean
    in your cummings
    and goings than to
    leave a blot or dot’.

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  5. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox
    Jun 10, 2026 @ 05:31:08

    🙂luv that humurous stanza, best

    Thanks for dropping by my blog, Lynn

    much love

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  6. Laura Bloomsbury's avatar Laura Bloomsbury
    Jun 10, 2026 @ 04:25:15

    your love of the pun shines through Lynn

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  7. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay
    Jun 10, 2026 @ 00:46:51

    I especially like the stanza

    “better to be clean
    in your cummings
    and goings than to
    leave a blot or dot”

    Thanks for writing, Lynn!

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  8. erbiage's avatar erbiage
    Jun 09, 2026 @ 20:43:13

    OMG!! this was cute and a fun read until that ending!

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  9. Becoming His Tapestry's avatar Becoming His Tapestry
    Jun 09, 2026 @ 19:50:28

    😂😂that’s funny

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  10. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Jun 09, 2026 @ 19:41:45

    This made me smile, Lynne. I love your play on words!

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