spring sevenling

A window view with dVerse poets….

i rake dead leaves
pick up fallen sticks
fill birdbath to brim

seven sparrows
fritter in chirpy circle
twitter reflectively on rim

lazy gaze out window sees spring days peep in

19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. janicead
    Apr 23, 2023 @ 15:38:12

    Now living on the fourth floor. No more bird bath for me. : > (


  2. Stine Writing and Miniatures
    Apr 20, 2023 @ 09:13:07

    I hope you don’t mind that I picked your poem. I just picked the first one that popped up when I went looking for poetry! https://christinebialczak.com/2023/04/20/npm-scavenger-hunt-scars-that-heal/


  3. rothpoetry
    Apr 19, 2023 @ 20:16:59

    Very nicely done, Lynn. I had a starling taking a bath in mine this morning!


  4. poetisatinta
    Apr 19, 2023 @ 15:50:22

    Lovely poem ❤️


  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Apr 19, 2023 @ 13:36:23

    I like the fact that three were seven sparrows… spring is here I think


  6. Jennifer Wagner
    Apr 19, 2023 @ 12:47:49

    Very nice…sevenlings are so fun to write and to read.


  7. Mish
    Apr 19, 2023 @ 12:45:06

    Nice little snippet of the business of Spring!


  8. merrildsmith
    Apr 19, 2023 @ 05:11:05

    Oh, I really love this little glimpse of your spring. Such a perfect short poem! Excellent!


  9. kim881
    Apr 19, 2023 @ 03:10:11

    Short and sweet, Lynn! Birdbaths, tables and feeders are a delight to observe through a window. Currently, there’s a cheeky rat that keeps raiding the fatballs, but the birds don’t seem to be bothered by it.


  10. msjadeli
    Apr 18, 2023 @ 20:22:01

    Very nice, Lynn! They can get loud can’t they.


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