A window view with dVerse poets….
i rake dead leaves
pick up fallen sticks
fill birdbath to brim
seven sparrows
fritter in chirpy circle
twitter reflectively on rim
lazy gaze out window sees spring days peep in

posting poetic prose
18 Apr 2023 19 Comments
in sevenling Tags: birdbath, sparrows, spring, twitter
A window view with dVerse poets….
i rake dead leaves
pick up fallen sticks
fill birdbath to brim
seven sparrows
fritter in chirpy circle
twitter reflectively on rim
lazy gaze out window sees spring days peep in
Apr 23, 2023 @ 15:38:12
Now living on the fourth floor. No more bird bath for me. : > (
Apr 24, 2023 @ 17:32:50
That’s too bad…but maybe you view birds in flight!
Apr 20, 2023 @ 09:13:07
I hope you don’t mind that I picked your poem. I just picked the first one that popped up when I went looking for poetry! https://christinebialczak.com/2023/04/20/npm-scavenger-hunt-scars-that-heal/
Apr 20, 2023 @ 15:42:24
I’m glad you picked my poem’s first stanza and like what you did with it!
Apr 19, 2023 @ 20:16:59
Very nicely done, Lynn. I had a starling taking a bath in mine this morning!
Apr 20, 2023 @ 15:47:03
The grackles boss the sparrows here!
Apr 20, 2023 @ 19:25:33
They can be quite agressive!
Apr 19, 2023 @ 15:50:22
Lovely poem ❤️
Apr 19, 2023 @ 16:26:59
thank you 🙂
Apr 19, 2023 @ 13:36:23
I like the fact that three were seven sparrows… spring is here I think
Apr 19, 2023 @ 12:47:49
Very nice…sevenlings are so fun to write and to read.
Apr 19, 2023 @ 16:27:27
Glad you like it!
Apr 19, 2023 @ 12:45:06
Nice little snippet of the business of Spring!
Apr 19, 2023 @ 05:11:05
Oh, I really love this little glimpse of your spring. Such a perfect short poem! Excellent!
Apr 19, 2023 @ 16:28:04
Thank you, Merril 🙂
Apr 20, 2023 @ 06:08:27
You’re welcome! 🙂
Apr 19, 2023 @ 03:10:11
Short and sweet, Lynn! Birdbaths, tables and feeders are a delight to observe through a window. Currently, there’s a cheeky rat that keeps raiding the fatballs, but the birds don’t seem to be bothered by it.
Apr 19, 2023 @ 16:29:07
Oh my, that reminds me of Charlotte’s Web and Templeton the rat!
Apr 18, 2023 @ 20:22:01
Very nice, Lynn! They can get loud can’t they.