Playing with tan renga form at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai…

shadows of leaves
cover the open holes
her flute forgotten (© Jane Reichhold)
she dances with woodland nymphs
notes floating on music of trees
(c) lynn__
posting poetic prose
03 May 2016 10 Comments
in tan renga Tags: dance, flute, leaves, music, spring, trees
Playing with tan renga form at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai…

shadows of leaves
cover the open holes
her flute forgotten (© Jane Reichhold)
she dances with woodland nymphs
notes floating on music of trees
(c) lynn__
03 May 2016 5 Comments
in tan renga Tags: lavender, lovers, moonlight, wisteria
A tan renga is written by two poets; first writes a haiku, second answers with 2 more lines…
in the moonlight
Wisteria flowers look fragile –
a gust of wind
(c) Chèvrefeuille
lovers on bench hold kisses
lavender snow covers path
(c) lynn__

source: Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
02 May 2016 22 Comments
in quadrille Tags: dance, music, skip, twist
courtly quadrille folk dance
waltzing matilda, she cancan
charlie does the charleston
c’mon baby, let’s twist
square skip your pardner
locomotion make love potion
disco dancin’, groovy prancin’
strut like king tutankhamen
play macarena on ocarina
from bebop to hip-hop,
music gonna move us!
A quadrille is a folk dance or a poem of exactly 44 words, not including title. At dVerse Poets Pub today, we’re writing quadrilles with the word “skip”.
30 Apr 2016 2 Comments
in shadorma Tags: mud, puddles, raincoat, spring, umbrella
mud puddles
announce spring is here
splash outdoors
jump to rhymes
“rain in spain falls on the plain”
yellow raincoat joy
The “shadorma” is a poetic form consisting of a six-line stanza (or sestet). The form is alleged to have originated in Spain. Each stanza has a syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5 for a total of 26 syllables. A poem may consist of one stanza, or a series. Link to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
29 Apr 2016 Leave a comment
in haiga Tags: apple, blossoms, hope, rain, spring, tears

photo credit: MARKOVICH PHOTO ART
Doesn’t this beautiful photo of apple blossoms on orange background lift one’s spirit? One more day of NaPoWriMo challenge to write 30 poems in 30 days! A lot of mine were haiku/haiga 🙂
28 Apr 2016 5 Comments
in classical haiku Tags: father, fish, lake, mountain, pines
by cold mountain lake
among whispering pines
father helps bait hook
Inspired by Ubugu’s haiku featured at CDHK
27 Apr 2016 13 Comments
in haibun, scripture Tags: death, flower, gardener, life, seed
As for man, his days are like grass; he flourishes like a flower of the field; for the wind passes over it, and it is gone, and its place knows it no more. Ps. 103:15, 16
Death does not discriminate but believes in equal opportunity for all. Flowers and weeds, sinners and saints…each granted a brief cycle of seasons on the earth. Life begins as a seed, planted in sanctuary of womb. Cells divide, cotyledon splits; embryo develops limbs, groping in darkness. Birth breaks through to sunlight! Youthful stem grows, green with life’s energy, curling out curious leaves. Powered by nutrients through roots and pollinated by buzzing ideals, adolescence buds into flowering adulthood. A productive life spreads, shades, bears nourishing fruit until the final harvest. Life’s wisdom fades to delicate lace, leaving precious seed for the generation to follow. How one lives determines how one dies. May it be at peace, in the presence of the good and gracious Gardener.
life’s full breath expires
vein beauty in brevity
flower cut from field

Link to dVerse Poets haibun prompt featuring photography of Susan Judd
26 Apr 2016 3 Comments
in quadrille Tags: bubbles, girl, pool, swim, trouble
Trying to meet the challenge of writing a poem/haiku every day for National Poetry Month, I found this draft poem I wrote (never posted) to an earlier dVerse prompt; a true story in quadrille form of 44 words.
rising bubbles,
hint of troubles
hot sun, stay cool
float in deep pool
girl cannot swim
slips thru ring’s rim
bubbles, bubbles
danger doubles
sinking under
filled with wonder
relaxed, no panic
water clear blue
go down for two
beautiful bubbles
belie her troubles
Thanks, Dad, for “fishing” me out in time…and paying for swimming lessons soon after!
25 Apr 2016 Leave a comment
in tanka Tags: birdsong, Creator, joy, sun, symphony
birdsong symphony
set treetops a~twittering
praise their Creator
a~waken, you sleepyheads
greet with joy a~rising sun!
22 Apr 2016 18 Comments
in decima Tags: Bonnie, car, Clyde, gun, robbery
my momma, she try to warn me
“he’s trouble…jus’ like yer old man
find sumpthin’ better… if ya can.”
course, i didn’t listen to her plea;
Clyde winked as i sat on his knee
he taught me how to aim a gun,
showed me armed robbery be fun!
terrorized those folks in Texas
FBI came lookin’ for us
cops ambushed car, our daze was done.

This poetic form is a “decima” with 10 lines of 8 syllables each and abbaaccddc rhyme scheme. Read more at d’Verse Poets where Gayle is hosting!
21 Apr 2016 1 Comment
in tanka Tags: dog, friend, Lily, memories, rabbits

Lily
miss my furry friend;
so many peaceful rabbits
…reminders of her
we watch them nibble clover
growing fat, no need to run
20 Apr 2016 2 Comments
in haiga Tags: mud, roads, snow, water

photo by lynn New Mexico 2016
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